However, there are a couple nitpicks that caught my attention , first is the transition between the 2 scenes below:
This works well on storyboard but when it came to the animation , the sudden change in the position of his arms from holding the belt to gripping the seat handle makes the scene seems really detached from each other, creating a bump in the animation. Second problem would be within the latter of the two above , when he's pushing his feet against the seat , his legs should straighten out a bit to make more visible that he's pushing against it . These problem was caused mostly due to frame limit , so I can probably fix it with additional frames thrown in . But overall , it's a good effort !
**Update : Fixed errors , the final version where the adjustments mentioned above have been made. It definitely works better !
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